I quite liked this! The initial rhythm was so lively (very daring, I think --many people rely on a slower one, as a crutch, thinking it gives them weight), and it built up to that blow-by-blow breakdown so well. I really enjoyed it.
And of course I hope everything goes well, and that you love the new garden as much as the old.
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And of course I hope everything goes well, and that you love the new garden as much as the old.